Part I – [link]


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  1. Shadow Says:

    Very clever

  2. Stone Says:

    WoW, great work. I am continully awed by your skill.

  3. Shadow Says:

    Well I do think there is a bit of something missing between part I and II. The first part speaks of the creation of the void then the second speaks of the tales of men. Something a bit missing between them in my opinion.

    The rhyme and meter falls quite well, there is just that abrupt positioning between the two.

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