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Well I do think there is a bit of something missing between part I and II. The first part speaks of the creation of the void then the second speaks of the tales of men. Something a bit missing between them in my opinion.
The rhyme and meter falls quite well, there is just that abrupt positioning between the two.
Digital Metaphor 
November 23, 2009 at 6:33 pm |
Very clever
November 24, 2009 at 7:38 pm |
The lady of shadows approves! Most excellent 😉 What are your thoughts on it as a piece?
November 23, 2009 at 11:32 pm |
WoW, great work. I am continully awed by your skill.
November 24, 2009 at 7:52 pm |
Thanks alot Amber! Hey, your kind words always keep me writing, so fair trade eh? 🙂
November 24, 2009 at 10:52 pm |
Well I do think there is a bit of something missing between part I and II. The first part speaks of the creation of the void then the second speaks of the tales of men. Something a bit missing between them in my opinion.
The rhyme and meter falls quite well, there is just that abrupt positioning between the two.
November 24, 2009 at 11:55 pm |
I agree with Shadow, both pieces are great, but I don’t see them fitting together seamlessly.